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Morthagg

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Awesome! I love the technique you use here, it's quite vibrant and the drawing itself just kicks ass. I think it would also make for great a great T-shirt design.

BryanV responds:

Thanks!

You seem to be headed in a pretty good direction, but I'd try shading and less flashy colours next time. You seem like you could indeed make your drawings a lot better and more interesting with a different program, or if you started shading a bit more.
Try GIMP! It's a decent art program, better option than paint and it's free.

El-Jay-El-Rey responds:

Yeah. I have problems establishing a light source and making it believable when it comes to shading, so more often than not I find myself leaving my work a tad bland and dull. I'm aware of GIMP. Fact, I've had it downloaded for quite some time. Using it is another thing. Me and GIMP? We're not real good friends. Wish I had the talent all these Photoshop and GIMP wizards have.

Nice, but..

The face is well done, good, realistic technique without losing the feel of a drawing. I'm keeping a few points though (if I could I'd give you a 7.5) because the hand seems out of proportion. Too large (along with the arm), and a bit too heavy on the shading.
Try not to overlook the drawing as a whole before you get lost in details.
But anyway, nicely done!

Not bad, but some remarks

Overall, it's a bit simple, but that's okay. The concept is nice, but if I may give some advice: eyelashes are not a bunch of hairs bundled together. A close-up of an eye will have very obvious single eyelashes and drawing them one by one will give a much more realistic looking eye.
Furthermore what I think is a little mistake: it seems though you reflected your own eye backwards. If it was a reflection the iris would be looking down instead of up. If that was on purpose though, pretend I didn't say anything.

yep

Simple yet great. Not a lot more to say other than the fact that the absurdity is well played out, and your drawing style is just right for a cartoon like this.

ToonHole responds:

Thanks Morthagg!

Heh

This actually kind of reminds me of the comic Black Hole. I don't know if you know it?
Well, I think it's pretty nice, exept I don't like the colouring of the hair, sweater and teeth. It's too.. soft and blurry compaired to the dark lines of the face. Flatter colours would have worked better, I think.
Anyway, good job.

Haha

That was NOT what I expected.

Hm

The content of the comic is kind of okay, but the art could be a lot better. It doesn't do the content justice. Try and clean up the linework, clean up your shading, and maybe work on some backgrounds. The lines are uneven and not consistent. I was trying to give it a 6, but.. it just isn't good enough.

Heh

Your art is getting more and more teeth. I still adore it, though.

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Goddamn asshole. And I was completely head over heels in love with what 'you' made. Pfrt.

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